by Androclez
Disclaimer: Sonic the Hedgehog and all related characters are the property of Sega/Sonic Team. Don't know if I have to do that here or not.
Author's Note: I originally wrote this fanfiction as a fully illustrated fan comic back in 1995 when I was twelve years old. This is old-time stuff. None of the newer characters will be present. It's based somewhere in between the SatAM world and the video games of that period; especially Sonic 3 & Knuckles and Triple Trouble. There's also a bit of the Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog (my personal favorite) in here. Figured I'd share it with everyone here too.
It's a typical day in the life of Sonic the Hedgehog. Sonic is taking a joy-run through some random zone at supersonic speeds. The juice is flowing freely and it's feeling good. Far behind, a voice can be faintly heard calling out to him. Through the thick cloud of dust in Sonic's wake we can make out a familiar figure.
(cough cough) “Slow down Sonic!” (cough), Tails sputtered.
Sonic is so caught up in the thrill of his run that he doesn't seem to notice his little buddy's plea.
“Sonic! Soooo-niiiic! Wait for me!” the fox boy cried.
“Huh? Is that Tails?” Sonic wondered. “What does he want now?”
“Slow down a little Sonic! I can't keep up!” Tails pleaded.
Sonic begrudgingly consents.
“Ugh! Alright Tails, I'm slowin' down,” Sonic moaned impatiently.
(huff huff), Tails chugged along.
(yawn) “C'mon 'lil bro, catch up already!” Sonic called back to him.
“I'm trying Sonic! Nobody's as fast as you,” Tails replied.
“Yo Tails! Look! It's one of those giant loop-de-loops!” (like from the early games), Sonic exclaimed.
With an extra burst of speed, Sonic zooms through the loop-de-loop effortlessly. Tails gazes at the giant structure warily, unsure if he can duplicate Sonic's gravity defying stunt. But he decides to give it a go anyway. Kicking his feet up, he dashes forth as best he can... but his efforts prove to be insufficient!
CRASH!
Unable to raise up enough speed to traverse the obstacle, Tails crashes face-first right into a wall of the loop-de-loop! Then he falls down right on his two furry booties.
“Ha, ha, haaa! Hee hee he, ho Oh man! What a slow-mo!” Sonic howled with laughter. “That Tails is always crackin' me up! It's times like this that remind me of why I even keep him around!”
“Fortunately nothing serious ever happens,” said Sonic. “The little klutz never REALLY gets hurt. That way he survives on to the next laugh!” he chuckled.
Immediately the material of the loop-de-loop started to crack apart from the impact of Tails' crash. The structure completely collapses right on top of Tails!
“Haaww haw haw-! Wha-?! Wait a minute!” said Sonic, suddenly. “Tails might really be... (gulp) ...dead!”
LOL! This was the "suspenseful" stopping point when I first drew the story, but because of the 400 word minimum we'll get to see what happened right away.
Snapping to his senses, Sonic quickly runs over to the wreckage of the loop-de-loop that has just collapsed on top of Tails.
“Tails, are you okay?!” Sonic shouted. “Tails???”
Sonic lifts a big piece of the wreckage and looks underneath. He's shocked to see how badly his comically clumsy companion is really hurt.
“Ta- Tails?! Is that blood?” he gasped. “Aw no! This wasn't supposed to happen!”
“It- It's okay Sonic...” Tails groaned. “Ju- just help me up and...”
BOOM! In a panic, Sonic dropped the huge piece of rubble back on top of Tails; unable to face the harsh reality of what happened to his little buddy.
“Hey!” Tails yelled. “What are you- Oomph!”
“Ahh! What do I do?!” Sonic screamed. “Panic! Disaster! Help! Gotta rush back home! Rush home to knothole! Yes, that's it! I'll go to Knothole Village!”
Sonic jets back to the village where he finds the insufferable soldier, Antoine D'Coolette standing guard at the entrance.
“Hold eet!” said Antoine, in his exaggerated accent. “You must 'ave zee proof you are reely Sonic ze hoghedge before I let you through!”
“Get outta my way 'Twan, and don't ever get in my way again!” Sonic rudely snapped at Antoine, as he pushed his way past him.
“Hmm. Zat ees Sonic all right!” decided Antoine.
Sonic goes rushing through the village looking for someone he can confide in about the horrible accident that occurred. He zips right by Rotor, accidentally running over his feet in the process.
“Ow!” Rotor yelped.
Sonic puts on the brakes.
“Sorry Rotor.” Sonic quickly apologized. “Listen, I have something to tell you.”
“Yeah, what is it?” asked Rotor.
“You see,” said Sonic, hesitantly. “Tails is...”
“Go on.” said Rotor.
“Look, Tails ran into a loop-de-loop it broke and fell on top of him before I could do anything about it and none of this is my fault at all! Okay?!” Sonic blurted out.
“I dunno Sonic. Sounds like you really screwed up big this time.” said Rotor. “Sally is gonna be MAJORLY ticked when she hears about this!”
Sally happened to be within earshot the entire time.
“Did I hear right?! Why on Mobius did you let Tails attempt such a dangerous stunt in the first place?!” she demanded. “It's this kind of foolish, irresponsible behavior-”
“I can't take this anymore!” interrupted Sonic. “I'm outta here!”
Sensing that Sally was about to go into one of her long, boring speeches about responsibility, Sonic took off in the opposite direction. He began thinking to himself...
“So Tails is really gone,” Sonic reflected. “It won't be the same around here without somebody to pick on,” he sighed. “Maybe I just won't be a Freedom Fighter anymore.”
Sonic thinks on the whole matter a little further and comes to a conclusion.
“Yeah. Yeah, that's it! I know exactly where I need to go!” Sonic proclaimed. “I'll take a stop off somewhere that I shoulda been in the first place.”
After traveling for a while, Sonic finally arrives at his destination.
“I'm here,” Sonic announced to himself. “Robotropolis!”
What?! Is Sonic really switching sides on us?! Or does he have some other trick up his sleeve to prove he can be responsible? Don't worry, the rest will be posted in no time.
What do you think? I'm interested in hearing people's comments. No spoilers if you've already read it by some chance.


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