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this is my first comic,but i made the first issue too big so i had to cut part one in half.
that is the first half.
so what u guys think?
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Sonic:Chapter 1 Heroes Destiney my first comic,although a little messed
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Sucaru 
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Posted 30 September 2007 - 01:56 PM
here i go....
this is my first comic,but i made the first issue too big so i had to cut part one in half.
that is the first half.
so what u guys think?
this is my first comic,but i made the first issue too big so i had to cut part one in half.
that is the first half.
so what u guys think?
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Dragon of Light,
Cast sorrows from the sky,
The Sun is born.
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Dragon of Darkness,
Lives a shadow for eternity,
The Moon is born.
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Tower of the sky,
Story of Life,
The Twin Dragons take their turns,
Silver Dragon,
Gold Dragon,
To bring the Tower down.
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The Dawn of Reckoning is near,
Shadows of Oblivion,
Destroy the Gold Dragon,
Life as we know it is gone.
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The Shadow Dragon emerges.
Dragon of Light,
Cast sorrows from the sky,
The Sun is born.
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Dragon of Darkness,
Lives a shadow for eternity,
The Moon is born.
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Tower of the sky,
Story of Life,
The Twin Dragons take their turns,
Silver Dragon,
Gold Dragon,
To bring the Tower down.
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The Dawn of Reckoning is near,
Shadows of Oblivion,
Destroy the Gold Dragon,
Life as we know it is gone.
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The Shadow Dragon emerges.
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Muzzy Roberto
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Posted 30 September 2007 - 03:38 PM
Okay: First off, resize the sprite so that they're larger, cut the panels down so there's no so much empty space, text boxes should not have a line of text then a big box of empty white space
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Arcane and Pony
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Posted 30 September 2007 - 05:42 PM
Also, try using real sprite backgrounds from the games or even other games as well. It gives it a nicer feel. Also, the comic didn't make much sense. D:
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