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my non sonic art. yay for me

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Posted 28 September 2007 - 03:43 AM

please give comments on him and how i can improve. ( i know his hands and face are mest up but it would be helpful if you gave comments on how to improve on them.


i dunno what he is, i guess he's some kind of assassin.

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Posted 28 September 2007 - 01:26 PM

hmm anyone

i guess i'll put up another one

Alien Hominid

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Posted 28 September 2007 - 11:20 PM

The first pic looks a lil' bit noobish, but better than me, that's for sure!

The Alien Hominid's looking as a crappy(me, hehe) hasn't drewn it... More likely, it's good!
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Posted 29 September 2007 - 07:56 PM

Hmm, for the first picture, I'd say that your proportions are way off. You show potential, but you should practice your shaping and sizes a little more, and also the way the body moves. He has no neck. D: Poor guy. Also his left arm looks literally detached from his body; try moving your arms into that exact position, and your body as well. If you try what poses you plan on drawing before you do, you can really get a feel of how wacky it looks. & your alien hominid is uber cute. :3
But anyway, to help you out a bit (being a fellow artist), I suggest doing these things, but remember to just have fun with it. :9
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Posted 30 September 2007 - 06:46 PM

thanx. i'm better at drawing off the computer, but my scanner's not working right now and my proportions are a bit better freehand

but i'll work on those things.

i did thise one on photo shop, its not really a true drawing though

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