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my first sprite comic opinions please

#21 User is offline   SONICROXS Icon

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Posted 04 October 2007 - 03:34 AM

What if i make only knuckles go super form?
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Posted 04 October 2007 - 03:42 AM

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Okay, promise me you'll never do this again:

"brin
g it
on!"

You had TONS of room to make the bubble bigger!
AH!

And, outline your bubbles, make the borders the same size & ALIGNED, round them off it looks nicer.

Here:
I used speech bubbles with a border. My font is Comic Sans MS 9pt. The border around the panel is 3px.

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Doesn't it look much nicer? You had so much spare room in the last panel! Also, try not to cut off Shadows head if it's avoidable. And it was.
Btw, I used paint to do all this, so I KNOW you can do it!
"Pss, hey Guido, its all so clear to me now. I'm the keeper of the cheese and you're the lemon merchant, you get it? And he knows it. That's why he's gonna kill us. So we got to beat it, ya, before he let's loose the marmosets on us. Don't worry little missy, I'll save you!"
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Posted 04 October 2007 - 03:43 AM

Heck, I could of deleted all the extra room too.
"Pss, hey Guido, its all so clear to me now. I'm the keeper of the cheese and you're the lemon merchant, you get it? And he knows it. That's why he's gonna kill us. So we got to beat it, ya, before he let's loose the marmosets on us. Don't worry little missy, I'll save you!"
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Posted 04 October 2007 - 03:48 AM

AND, try and center it more. That might help too. Wooh!

I realised now I could of edited all that, but it's too late. Aha, sorry.

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"Pss, hey Guido, its all so clear to me now. I'm the keeper of the cheese and you're the lemon merchant, you get it? And he knows it. That's why he's gonna kill us. So we got to beat it, ya, before he let's loose the marmosets on us. Don't worry little missy, I'll save you!"
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Posted 13 October 2007 - 09:51 PM

Sorry that i have been gone for so long.please read.PLEASE!(aat the end vote who Rouge will forgive and go out with)
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Posted 20 January 2008 - 08:01 AM

AGREED, Shadow will kick knuckles ass
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Posted 17 February 2008 - 11:20 PM

This thread,even though mine is dead. So....dont post any more.
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Posted 14 April 2008 - 11:34 PM

The comic is good, i vote that rouge goes out... with tails, to make it
funny

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games and pizza... Yes! PIZZA!
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Posted 15 April 2008 - 12:03 AM

SONICROXS, on Feb 17 2008, 11:20 PM, said:

This thread,even though mine is dead. So....dont post any more.
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Posted 25 September 2008 - 04:57 PM

I wanna see a SFF!!! :lol: :lol:



(Super Form Fight)
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